Question

【题目】假定你是学生李华，最近，学校打算为同学们制作统一的校服，请你给闫校长写一封建议信，要点如下：

1.写信的目的 2.对校服的布料，款式等提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Yan,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Yan ,

Knowing that our school will order uniform for us, I am writing to make some suggestions.

Our uniform is worn almost every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like. First of all, I’d prefer it to be made of cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin. Second, It’s tiring to see the same clothes everywhere at school, so please let boys and girls have different uniforms . Third, I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. All students can vote and choose their favorite styles.

I’d be honored if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

【解析】试题分析：试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是（１）写信的目的 （２）对校服的布料，款式等提出建议并说明理由。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇英文书信。书信格式正确，要点齐全，层次分明，布局合理，运用高级句子。Our uniform is worn nearly every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like.被动语态，并列句和宾语从句完美结合；I’d prefer it to be made cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin.句中使用原因状语从句；Third, I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. All students can vote and choose their favorite styles.suggest后面用含虚拟语气的宾语从句（should）+动词原形；I’d be honored if you could take my suggestions into consideration.被动语态和if引导的条件状语从句出现在句中；另外，First of all, Second, Third,为文章增色添彩。