Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华，你校交换生Jim在给你的email中提到他对学生会组织的活动感兴趣，并希望你给他提供一项适合他参加的活动。请你给Jim回邮件，内容包括：

活动名称及意图;

活动具体安排;

邀请他参加。

注意：1．词数不少于50；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I am so happy to know that you are interested in the activities that the Students’ Union will organize.

Next Saturday, there will be a field trip to the Olympic Forest Park. Students will be walking 5km there. We will meet at 8 at the gate of the park and start our walking. All students will wear the T-shirts with our special logo. At the end of the activity we will take a group picture.

I strongly recommend it. I believe it is a good way to get close to nature, work out, have fun and promote the relationship. It will help you know more about your companions. What’s more, it is wonderful to exercise while enjoying the great view.

Please join us!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.由于向Jin提供的活动发生在将来，所以通篇以一般将来时为主。

2.本题的要点只是简单的大纲。需要学生对其进行具体的阐述，充分发挥自身的想象力，写出具体的活动事件。

3.注意语气。要想成功邀请他参与这个活动，就要写出参与这个活动会给他带来什么好处，语气应该比较恳切，有说服力。

【范文亮点】1. I believe it is a good way to get close to nature, work out, have fun and promote the relationship.我相信这是亲近自然、在外工作、尽情玩耍以及促进友谊的好方法。（使用动词不定式作后置定语，修饰way，且是多个动词词组并列修饰，同学们要多学习这类表达）

2. What’s more, it is wonderful to exercise while enjoying the great view.此外，在欣赏美景的同时可以锻炼是非常棒的。（连接词what’s more的使用，起到了很好的逻辑连接作用；此外，采用了由while引导的复合句）