Question

【题目】假定你是李华，看到班上有部分同学在做作业时，不自己独立完成而是抄袭他人的作业，针对这种现象，请你以My Opinion on Copying Others' Homework为题谈谈你自己的看法。

注意：1．短文必须包括下面表格中的所有内容要点，可适当发挥。

2．短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

3．词数150左右。

主要原因	作业量大，偏难
	对功课不感兴趣，懒隋
	完成任务，取悦老师
危害及解决办法	抄袭不对，违反校规
	要诚实，勤奋学习
	有困难可请教同学和老师
个人看法	……

My Opinion on Copying Others' Homework

It is known to us all that some students copy others' homework ...

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Answer 1

【答案】

My opinion on copying others’ homework

It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework. As students, we have to do plenty of homework both at home and at school, but sometimes we have some homework which is too difficult for us. On the other hand, some students are lazy, and are not interested in their lessons. They don’t work hard. In order to finish the assignments and please their teachers, some students copy others’ homework.

In my opinion, it is wrong to copy others’ homework because it breaks the school rules. Students should be honest and try to finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying. Even though we have trouble doing our homework we can ask our classmates or teachers for help.

【解析】

【试题分析】这是一篇叙述性地议论文写作。依据题目及表格所提供的信息，以表格中的三点内容为主，清晰表达，并且要不失亮点，准确把握英文句子的书写，避免出现汉语式英语的现象。要求：：1．短文必须包括下面表格中的所有内容要点，可适当发挥。2．短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 3．词数150左右。【亮点说明】范文共两段，虽结构简单，但是层次清晰，其中也用了一些高级的句型，使得文章水平在一个高的层面，如: Even though we have trouble doing our homework we can ask our classmates or teachers for help.复合主从句；but sometimes we have some homework which is too difficult for us.等定语从句；It is 句型：it is wrong to copy others’ homework because it breaks the school rules. 。还采用了一些比较好的短语，On the other hand，另一方面；In my opinion，依我看来；有条有理，避免文章比较单一，简单无味；同样有一些好的动词的固定搭配：both at home and；In order to；is too difficult for；have trouble doing；are not interested in如这些都给文章带来了亮点。