Question

【题目】假定你是李华，暑假在澳大利亚悉尼歌剧院参观时结识了当地青年Jack,参观过程中他为 你提供了很多帮助。在你即将回国之际，给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：

1.感谢他的帮助；2.你的收获与祝福。

注意：

1.词数：100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：悉尼歌剧院Sydney Opera House

Dear Jack,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

I am writing to deliver my heartfelt thanks to you for your timely help during my visit at the Sydney Opera House. I appreciate your guidance and the time you spent accompanying me.

I can still remember that I was at a loss what to do next. Then it was you who offered me valuable advice on how to explore it. With my invitation, you even gladly agreed to accompany me there. In the following hours, we had so much fun. Your point of view gave me a new prospective and I gained valuable insights, which made me have a better knowledge of the opera house.

Thank you again. If I may be of help to you, please let me know. Wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封感谢信，表达对Jack的感谢。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应主要为一般过去时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表明写信目的

2.表达感谢及收获

1）表达感谢。（appreciation）

2）收获与祝福。（gains and wishes）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

deliver; appreciate; be at a loss; valuable advice; agree to do; a new prospective; If

第三步：连词成句

1. I am writing to deliver my heartfelt thanks to you for your timely help during my visit at the Sydney Opera House.

2. I appreciate your guidance and the time you spent accompanying me.

3. I can still remember that I was at a loss what to do next.

4. Then it was you who offered me valuable advice on how to explore it.

5. you even gladly agreed to accompany me there.

6. Your point of view gave me a new prospective

7. If I may be of help to you, please let me know.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改