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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’m happy to share you my journey to London. During the journey, I visited some places of interest, some of that made a deep impression on me. I went to two famous concerts, which reduced me stress and made me relaxing. Then I watched various football match. In addition, I enjoyed deliciously local food. Meanwhile, I made some new friends. In a conclusion, I experienced British culture but this broadened my eyes.

Spring was the best season to visit Beijing. Would you like to visit it? I’m looking forward to meet you in Beijing.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.固定搭配：share sb. with sth.与某人分享某物，故在share后面加with。

2.此处some places of interest做先行词，指物，后面是非限制性定语从句，some of which(指物)/whom(指人)，引导非限制性定语从句，故把that---which。

3.句意：减少我的压力。形容词性物主代词修饰名词，故把me---my。

4.句意：使我感到放松。make+宾语+过去分词，可知答案为relaxed。

5. various各种各样的，后跟可数名词的复数形式，故把match---matches。

6.句意：我喜欢当地的美味食品。形容词修饰名词，故把deliciously---delicious。

7.固定词组： In conclusion最后，总之，故把a去掉。

8.句意：我体验到了英国文化，这使我开阔了视野。根据句意可知此处是递进的并列关系，故把but---and。

9.句意：春天是参观北京的最好季节。根据句意可知用一般现在时态，故把was---is。

10.固定搭配：look forward to sth./doing sth.期盼某事或做某事，故把meet---meeting。