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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’ve been playing volleyball since three years before. It started when a teacher set up volleyball club in our school, hope that more students would join in the sport. The club was very popular that many students signed up for it. To be honestly, at that time I just followed them without thinking. We practiced together on every Saturday morning. However, some of the students soon began to get boring and dropped out of the club. So I found I was quite enjoying it and I carry on. After training for some time, I was selected for the school team. What excited and proud I was!

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【解析】作者讲述了喜欢打排球的原因和故事经过。

1. before →ago.考查同义词。before 表示过去某个时间起之前，ago表示从现在起多长时间之前。此处指从现在起三年前用ago，故before →ago.

2. volleyball前加a.考查冠词。句中club是可数名词，此处表示一个排球俱乐部，要加表示“一个”的冠词a，故volleyball前加a.

3. hope→hoping.考查现在分词。句中主语a teacher和动词hope是主动关系，此处作状语用现在分词，故hope→hoping.

4. very→so.考查固定结构。此处表示俱乐部如此受欢迎以至于许多学生报名，表示“如此…以至于”用so …that句型，故very→so.

5. honestly →honest.考查形容词。此处作动词be的表语用形容词，to be honest “说实话”，是固定短语，故honestly →honest.

6.去掉on.考查介词。表示每周六上午是every Saturday morning，every前不加介词，故去掉on.

7. boring →bored.考查形容词。boring 表示令人厌烦的，常修饰物；bored“无趣的“，常修饰物。此处指学生们感到厌烦用get bored，故boring →bored.

8. So →But.考查连词。许多同学感到打排球无趣就退出了俱乐部，但我发现很喜欢打排球。前后句是转折关系用连词but，故So →But.

9. carry →carried.考查动词时态。我发现很喜欢打排球就继续了下来，与and前的动词found时态一致也用一般过去时，故carry →carried.

10.What→How.考查感叹句。引导感叹句时What感叹名词，How感叹形容词或副词，此处感叹形容词excited and proud用how引导感叹句，故What→How.