Question

【题目】请阅读下面文子及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

In a recent survey of 300 Chinese born after 1990, 54 percent of the respondents said they had hair loss, 51 percent had poorer eyesight, 45percent gained weight and 35 percent had weakened immunity. At the same time, about 65 percent said they always stayed up late. Meanwhile, 56.7 percent of interviewees said they didn’t know how to live a healthy life.

Wu Feng, who works at a private company in Beijing, was warned in this year’s physical examination report about hyperlipemia, a condition which he ascribed (归因于) to his diet and the fast pace of his life and work.

“At work, I usually sit in the office for hours without moving my body. And when I eat at the canteen, the food is quite oily. What’s more, I like to order fast food, such as fried chicken, at night when I work extra hours,” Wu said.

A post-90s programmer Wang Ke has been seeing abnormal parameters in his medical report in the past few years. He knew he had some bad habits, but it was not easy for him to change. “I know drinking too much milk tea is unhealthy, but I couldn’t stop myself,” he said.

（写作内容）

1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

2. 结合上述信息，简要分析不健康的生活方式的危害；

3. 根据你的实际情况，谈谈如何拥有健康的生活方式。

（写作要求）

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

（评分标准）

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】Among all the factors that influence health, lifestyle plays a dominant role. But many youngsters of today are leading an unhealthy lifestyle, which has caused great damage to their health.

An unhealthy lifestyle is definitely one of the major contributors to many health issues. What is widely known is that various illnesses are associated with lack of exercise and an unhealthy diet. Besides, sleep deprivation can not only affect our memory but also our overall health. Worse still, an unhealthy lifestyle may predict a shorter lifespan.

From a well-being perspective, it’s crucial that we should develop a healthy lifestyle. Exercise should be taken regularly to boost our immune system. Eating right is also a practical method of living healthily. In addition, too much stress poses a threat to our health, so we should learn to manage it. Most importantly, bear in mind that only with self-discipline can we build and maintain a healthy lifestyle.

【解析】

本篇书面表达考查学生的读写能力。

本篇读写任务首先要求用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；结合上述信息，简要分析不健康的生活方式的危害；根据你的实际情况，谈谈如何拥有健康的生活方式。半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides，worse still，in addition，most importantly等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。切记写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；不必写标题。