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13.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Music is the international language.The songs sung or playing by instruments are beautiful to people everywhere.Popular music in America is that every student likes.Students carry small radios with earphones,but listen to music before class,after class,and at lunch.There are other kinds music that are important to Americans.One is called folk music,it tells stories about common life of Americans.Another is called western or country music,started by cowboys whom would sing to the cows they were watching out.Today,any music about the love between a country boy and his girl friend are called western or country music.

分析 音乐作为一种国际语言无处不在.本文介绍了美国的两种音乐形式--民间音乐和乡村音乐及它们不同的表现形式.

解答 短文改错1.the→an    2.playing→played  3.that→what   4.but→and   5.kinds后加of  6.it→which  7.common前加the  8.whom→who  9.去掉out  10.are→is
1.the→an 考查不定冠词. international language表示泛指,要用不定冠词,因international读音是发元音开头的,用an.
2.playing→played  考查过去分词.or要连接是并列成分,sing和play与songs之间是动宾关系,要用过去分词作定语.
3.that→what  考查代词.like是及物动词,缺少宾语,如用that,在表语从句中不可作宾语,what作like的宾语.
4.but→and   考查连词.此处上下文是并列关系,而不是转折关系.
5.kinds后加of  考查介词.kinds of为固定搭配,意为"各种各样的".
6.it→which  考查关系代词.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词folk music指物,要用关系代词which.
7.common前加the  考查定冠词.因其后有of Americans作后置定语,表示特指.
8.whom→who  考查关系代词.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,would sing to缺少主语,要用主格代词who.
9.去掉out  考查动词.watch out意为"当心",为不及物动词短语,与题意不符,去掉out,watch意为"观看;注视",是及物动词.
10.are→is 考查主谓一致.主语music是不可数名词,谓语动词要用单数.

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文、短文故事、书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.高考对短文改错的考察重点集中在动词、形容词、副词、介词、连词和代词上,其中包括固定搭配,固定句型以及行文逻辑的考察.看到题目的时候,先通篇读一遍,了解这篇短文的主要内容.然后再改错,简单的错误一定要看到,这就需要基础知识要扎实.看看时态,固定结构,句子成分是否有错.综合运用所学语言知识,根据各行不同的错误情况分别进行答题(即改词、加词或减词).

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