Question

请根据以下提示，并结合生活学习实际，用英语写一篇短文。
There is a crack (裂痕）in everything, so is our life, that’s how the light gets in.(Leonard Cohen, Canadian singer). We all possibly make a mistake, but what matters most is how to make use of the mistake to get improved.
注意：1．无需写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
2．除诗歌外，文体不限；
3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
4．字数为120词左右。

Answer 1

Sample:
I still remember the day when I was left alone at home. I carelessly broke the vase, which was much treasured by my father. When he came back, I was so fearful that I didn't tell the truth. The cat was my excuse. My father said nothing, but I could read his distrust .The next morning, after a restless night, I admitted to my father that it was my fault. I saw relief in his eyes. He smiled to me. From then on, I never told lies. My honesty won me great trust from others, which benefited my growth a lot. The accident or exactly the “crack” forced me to mind my behavior.
It is the" crack "that is reminding me all the time that I have a long way to go. With the light through the crack I can see the road ahead clearly.

解析试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文，材料以英文的形式给出，学生首先需要看懂所给材料，根据材料的意思进行构思。材料大意是“每个人都会犯错，重要的是，如何利用错误来提高自己”。注意作文不能抄写所给材料，不能写成诗歌。
【亮点说明】范文叙述了自己打破花瓶这件事，作者勇敢承认了自己的错误，并从中得到教训--诚信做人，这给作者带来了荣誉。
范文使用了短语tell the truth, told lies, From then on等；范文使用了较多的语法知识，如结果状语从句so fearful that；时间状语从句When he came back；定语从句when I was left alone at home和which was much treasured by my father及which benefited my growth a lot；宾语从句admitted to my father that it was my fault和...is reminding me that I have a long way to go；固定句型forced me to mind my behavior；强调句型It is...that等，能够熟练运用语法知识，给作文增色不少。
考点：材料类作文