Question

It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. No one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing one' s task. Strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own.

注意：

1. 不得照抄英语提示语。

2. 除诗歌外，文体不限。

3. 内容必须结合生活中的一个事例。

4. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

5. 词数为120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will

It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. One of the most typical examples is that in the present-day society, a growing number of people give up or fail to quit smoking just because of their poor willpower during the process. A variety of factors may account for this phenomenon as follows.

For one thing, no one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing one’s task. It is of importance for people to stick to their original aim. A great number of smokers would stop smoking a couple of days after they have made their determination, but only a few of them may succeed in the end. For another, the people who cannot quit smoking may easily be affected by his circumstance and surroundings. In that case, people tend to fail to resist various temptations around them.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文。开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

【亮点说明】范文用了一些常见短语： account for“解释”，A variety of“各种各样的”，as follows“如下”，. of importance “重要的”，stick to “坚持”，tend to“往往”，还有范文中的句式也很出彩： It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence.这句话用了固定句型， One of the most typical examples is that in the present-day society, a growing number of people give up or fail to quit smoking just because of their poor willpower during the process. 这句话用了表语从句，

no one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing one’s task.这句话用了同位语从句， the people who cannot quit smoking may easily be affected by his circumstance and surroundings.这句话用了定语从句， From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future. 这句话用了宾语从句，倒装句和同位语从句，还有范文还使用For one thing, For another, In that case,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。

考点：考查开放式作文