Question

【题目】假定你叫李华，你所在的学校拟在下个月举办100年校庆(the 100th anniversary)。

请你根据以下要点给知名校友张教授写一封短信，邀请他给学生做一次讲座，使学生更好了解他获得诺贝尔奖的成功经验。

讲座时间：12月5日早上9点到11点

讲座地点：教学楼201教室

注意：1.可适当增加细节，使结构完整：

2.词数100左右。

Dear Dr. Zhang，

Our school is planning to celebrate the 100th anniversary next month.

Best wishes.

Yours,

LI Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Dr. Zhang，

Our school is planning to celebrate the 100th anniversary next month. I am writing to ask whether it is convenient for you to come and give a lecture on how to achieve success as the Noble Prize winner.

The lecture，to be held at 9 o’clock on December 5th in Room 201 of the teaching building ，will last about two hours.

You are expected to give a lecture how you have won the prize and what your school life was like，which will help us have a better idea of our school history and be a great encouragement for us.

I would appreciate it if you could accept your invitation. Looking forward to seeing you and enjoying the lecture.

Best wishes

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假定你叫李华，你所在的学校拟在下个月举办100年校庆(the 100th anniversary)。请你根据以下要点给知名校友张教授写一封短信，邀请他给学生做一次讲座，使学生更好了解他获得诺贝尔奖的成功经验。讲座时间：12月5日早上9点到11点讲座地点：教学楼201教室。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

注意：1.可适当增加细节，使结构完整：2.词数100左右。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇邀请信，格式正确，内容齐全，布局合理，运用高级句子。I am writing to ask whether it is convenient for you to come and give a lecture on how to achieve success as the Noble Prize winner. whether引导宾语从句，how+to do 作宾语；The lecture，to be held at 9 o’clock on December 5th in Room 201 of the teaching building ，will last about two hours.动词不定式一般式的被动式作后置定语；You are expected to give a lecture how you have won the prize and what your school life was like，which will help us have a better idea of our school history and be a great encouragement for us. how和what用到同位语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句；I would appreciate it if you could accept your invitation.使用固定句式。