Question

11．请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文．
In English，there is a proverb"Promise is debt．"That is to say，a promise cannot be taken back once it is made．
注意：①无须写标题；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文提示意思为，有一则英语谚语叫做，承诺就是债务．这就是说，一旦做出承诺就不能收回．因此考生的写作话题应该是承诺，或诚信的重要性．注意使用生活中的事例，采用过去时或者现在时．写作时为了语言的连贯应该恰当使用连接词和插入语，还有高级词汇和句式的使用．
重要短语：
What's worse更糟的是，in return，作为回报，
高分句子：
1．There is no doubt that everybody makes promises all his life．本句中含有重要句式，There is no doubt that 毫无疑问的是．
2．Therefore，I think what is said can never be what is unsaid．本句中what is said 做主语，what is unsaid做宾语．
3．Only in this way can you be reliable．此句为only引导的条件状语从句，主句要倒装．

解答 There is no doubt that everybody makes promises all his life．（高分句型）But just as the proverb goes，"promise is debt"．Once you have made a promise，you must keep it； otherwise，you won't be worthy of good faith．What's worse，you will lose your friends and even fame．（点明中心）
    Take myself for example．One day when playing with my good friend Xiao Ming，I saw a beautiful bird flying in the sky．Liking it so much，I asked Xiao Ming to draw it for me and I would give him my doll in return．But after he finished the drawing，I broke my word and refused to give him the doll because I liked it so much too．Since then，I have lost my good friend．（举出事例）
　Therefore，I think what is said can never be what is unsaid．（高分句型）It is necessary and important to for you to think it twice before making a promise．Once you have made it，no matter what happens to you，you should keep to it．Only in this way can you be reliable，which will help you make a friend indeed and establish a good fame．（高分句型）

点评 对于开放式作文，考生写作时，可以选取能运用熟悉的英语词汇、句型的点进行展开，对于没有把握的地方，要灵活变通；要尽量运用多样化的句式，注意长短句的结合、简单句和复合句的结合；要注意上下文的衔接，过渡要自然；还要注意书写规范，做到卷面干净，字迹清晰．