Question

15．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修 改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Around the year 1900 Sven Hedin discovers the ruins of the Loulan Kingdom．He found the remains of buildings burying beneath the sand，together with a lot of treasure，including c oins and painted pots and wall paintings．When we went to the city，they saw the city walls，palaces，temples，workshops and towers．We found the ruins most interested．There was a ancient water system what ran through the middle of the city，and supplying water to the city．The desert was once a green land with huge trees，but they were cut down and that resulted from the city being buried by sand----how a pity!

Answer 1

分析 本文讲述了大约1900年，Sven Hedin发现了楼兰古国的遗迹，很多建筑都深埋于地下，上面被厚厚的沙子所覆盖．

解答 Around the year 1900 Sven Hedin discovers the ruins of the Loulan Kingdom．He found the remains of buildings burying beneath the sand，together with a lot of treasur 
                                                                                                                                                                   
e，including coins and painted pots and wall paintings．When we went to the city，they saw the city walls，palaces，temples，workshops and towers．We found the r
                                                                                                                      
uins most interested．There was a ancient water system what ran through the middle of the city，and supplying water to the city．The desert was once a green land wit
                                             
h huge trees，but they were cut down and that resulted from the city being buried by sand----how a pity!
                                                                                                                     

      详解：
      1．discovers改为discovered   时间是1900年，应该使用一般过去时 
        2．burying改为buried      the remains of buildings与bury之间是逻辑被动关系，应该使用过去分词作后置定语
       3．treasure改为treasures     treasure属于可数名词，前面有a lot of 修饰，应该使用复数形式
       4．they改为we    因为前后句子都是主语we，所以人称应该一致
       5．interested改为interesting    此处指的是遗迹是非常有趣的，-ing结尾的形容词指的是事物
      6．a 改为an   ancient属于元音开头，使用an
      7．what 改为which/that      ancient water system 后面跟的是定语从句，从句中缺少的是主语，所以使用关系代词
      8．and去掉    supplying water to the city在句中属于现在分词作状语不是并列关系，不能使用并列连词
      9．from改为in   result  in  导致  result  from由…导致，根据句意可知，此处是导致了
     10．how 改为what   感叹句中 how后跟形容词副词而what后跟名词，这里a pity是名词，使用what

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．