Question

11．假设你是李华，请你以自己网上购书所遇到的不愉快经历，向中国某家英文报纸生活栏目写一封抱怨信．要点如下：
1．所购书中有破损、缺页现象；
2．一些书籍价格比实体书店还要贵；
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）．
Dear Sir or Madame，
I am a middle school student．I am writing to express my dissatisfaction and disappointment about the unpleasant experience _____________________________________________________
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I would be grateful if you could take my opinion into consideration．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The reason for my dissatisfaction and disappointment is that the books I bought online were beyond my expectation．我的不满及失望来自于我在网上所购书籍完全超出我的意料，品质没有保障．
高分句型二：
To solve these problems，I am writing this letter to you，hoping that my letter will arouse the attention of the public through this media． 为了解决这些问题，我写了这封信给您，希望通过该平台能引起公众对此的关注．
句型一  用到了一个复合句型，在句中用一个that 引导的表语从句来说明原因，更具说服力，说明该生对此类从句用法掌握精准．
句型二 ①句首用到了to do 不定式作目的状语 ②句中用到了hoping 作伴随状语 此2处知识的运用，将非谓语使用的相当好，使文章增色很多．

解答 Dear Sir or Madame，
I am a middle school student．I am writing to express my dissatisfaction and disappointment about the unpleasant experience when I bought some books from the Internet the other day．
The reason for my dissatisfaction and disappointment is that the books I bought online were beyond my expectation．（高分句型一）In the first place，they were poorly printed．In addition，some books are slightly damaged and even some pages are missing．Needless to say，the price of some books is even higher than that in our local Xinhua Bookstores．
To solve these problems，I am writing this letter to you，hoping that my letter will arouse the attention of the public through this media．（高分句型二）I am fully confident that they will improve their service with the supervision of the public opinion．
I would be grateful if you could take my opinion into consideration．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 应用类书面表达多采用开头与结尾已经给出的形式，其目的在于给特定的对象传达信息．考生应注意平时积累适用于该类文体的常见用语，力求语言准确、简洁，句子不宜过长，要让读者一眼就能明白文章的重点．