Question

9．下列图表反映的是某校2007年与2010年学生健康状况调查的部分数据．请你用英文为某报写一份报告，反映该校三年间学生健康状况的变化情况，分析其原因并提出相应的改进措施（不少于两条）．

注意：
1．报告必须包括图表中所有内容．
2．词数：100左右．第一句已给出（不计入总词数）．
A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The number of nearsighted students has increased from 78.2% in 2002 to 92.5% in 2005，while that of overweight，from 36% to 52.4%．
本句中为while引导的两个并列句，表示对比，其中包含短语from…to…，The number of+复数名词，表示…的数量，后面的谓语动词用单数形式；以及后面代词that的准确使用（指代前面的The number of）．
高分句型二：
Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent them from being nearsighted．
本句为only+介词短语（状语）+部分倒装的句式用法，prevent…from…阻止某人做某事．
高分句型三：
Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won't easily put on weight．
本句为so that引导的一个结果状语从句，前面为被动语态的使用，pay attention to…注意…；put on weight发福，体重增加．

解答 A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years．The number of nearsighted students has increased from 78.2% in 2002 to 92.5% in 2005，while that of overweight，from 36% to 52.4%．（高分句型一） Nearly 10% more students lack sleep because of more homework to do．Besides，over 15% more students become mentally unhealthy．
To improve students'health，we call for less homework．Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent them from being nearsighted．（高分句型二）Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won't easily put on weight．（高分句型三）
         With their heavy burdens removed，students can then keep in normal mental health．

点评 数据分析类的作文，需要考生认真观察数据，透过现象看本质，从数据中分析原因，得出结论．数据分析类的作文，需要考生认真观察数据，透过现象看本质，从数据中分析原因，得出结论．