Question

18．随着髙考临近，某英语报社向学生征集给父母的一封信．假如你是某校髙三学生李华，准 备应报社之征给自己父母写一封信．信的要点包括：
1．感谢父母的关心和帮助；
2．向父母诉说两件心事*
3．根据心事向父母提出两个请求． 注意：
1．词数120左右》
2．文中不得提及真实人名、校名及地名；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出．（不计入总词数）．
Dear Dad and Mom，
With the College Entrance Examination around the corner，I feel both excited and sressed．There are lots of words I'd like to share with you two．
I'm always thankful to you for your making great efforts to take care of me unselfishly．Now I have two things in my mind that worry me a lot．One is that I have difficulty in understanding math lessons，and the other is that I think I have fallen in love with one of my classmates，which I'm afraid will affect my studies negatively．As a result，I really hope both of you can encourage me to overcome my trouble with my math lessons．Another requirement is to tell me how to deal with the relationship between boys and girls properly so that I can focus my energy on my studies．Thank you．
Best wishes！
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：One is that I have difficulty in understanding math lessons，and the other is that I think I have fallen in love with one of my classmates，which I'm afraid will affect my studies negatively．本句是一个复杂句，其中and连接了两个并列句"One is that…and the other is that"，两句都是that引导的表语从句，在第一个表语从句中用了英语的固定句型"have difficulty in doing sth"做某事有困难；这里which引导的是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代的是前面整个句子的意思．
高分句型二：As a result，I really hope both of you can encourage me to overcome my trouble with my math lessons．因此我希望你们两个能够鼓励我在数学课上能克服困难．其中both of you can encourage me to overcome my trouble with my math lessons是宾语从句．

解答 Dear Dad and Mom，
     With the College Entrance Examination around the corner，I feel both excited and sressed．There are lots of words I'd like to share with you two．
     I'm always thankful to you for your making great efforts to take care of me unselfishly．Now I have two things in my mind that worry me a lot．One is that I have difficulty in understanding math lessons，and the other is that I think I have fallen in love with one of my classmates，which I'm afraid will affect my studies negatively（句型一）．【向父母阐明心事】As a result，I really hope both of you can encourage me to overcome my trouble with my math lessons（句型二）．Another requirement is to tell me how to deal with the relationship between boys and girls properly so that I can focus my energy on my studies．Thank you．【向父母提出请求】
  Best wishes!
  Yours
  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．