Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你校广播站正在招收英文编辑，请你根据以下提示，向负责此事的外教Mr. Mark申请这一职务。要点如下：

职位要求: 1.有很强的英语表达能力

2.关心时事

个人优势: 1.有做记者的经历，沟通能力强

2.父亲是一位专职编辑，深受其影响

注意: 1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm writing to apply to be an English editor of the broadcasting station of our school.

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I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm writing to apply to be an English editor of the broadcasting station of our school, which I am wild about all the time

I'm qualified for the position based on the following reasons. First, I meet your requirements for the position well. That is, I have a good command of English communication skills. Besides, I am concerned a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism. Second, I was a part-time reporter when I was in junior middle school, which developed my communication and interpersonal skills. In addition, my father is a professional editor, by whom I was deeply influenced from an early age and from whom I learned a lot. Therefore, I am eager to get the position and I really hope I will be given the honor to be one of you.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，你校广播站正在招收英文编辑，请你根据以下提示，向负责此事的外教Mr. Mark申请这一职务。全文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。

第1步：审题。根据提示可知全文是一封书信，李华向负责招聘的外教Mr. Mark申请校广播站英文编辑的职务。全文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。1.有很强的英语表达能力；2.关心时事；3.个人优势: 有做记者的经历，沟通能力强；父亲是一位专职编辑，深受其影响。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为apply to、qualified for、meet your requirements、have a good command of、be concerned a lot about current affairs、develop my communication and interpersonal skills、be deeply influenced等。写作时注意书信和惯用语。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。