Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办以“Changes in My City”为主题的作品展评活动。优秀作品将在校园网上展示。请你用英语写一份书面通知，内容包括：

1. 活动目的；

2. 作品形式（绘画、摄影、音乐等）；

3. 作品要求（原创、紧扣主题）；

4. 截止日期：6 月 25 日; 作品发送至邮箱: hilihua@163.com。

注意：1. 词数 100 左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Notice

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Student Union

Answer 1

【答案】Notice

An exciting event “Changes in My City” is around the corner. Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your talent and skills. Note that your contributions should present the changes of our city. The following contribution forms are suggested: painting, calligraphy, photograph, music, folk art and so on. All the works are expected to be original and positive. Excellent collections will be shown on the campus net. All the students are welcome to send your artworks to hilihua@163.com by June 25.

Your contributions will certainly make the event a huge success. Come on, everybody! It’ s your show time.

Student Union

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一份书面通知，通知同学们参加“Changes in My City”为主题的作品展评活动。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 活动目的；

2. 作品形式（绘画、摄影、音乐等）；

3. 作品要求（原创、紧扣主题）；

4. 截止日期：6 月 25 日; 作品发送至邮箱: hilihua@163.com。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

around the corner；be expected to；give full play to；contribution forms；are welcome to

第三步：连词成句

1. Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your talent and skills.

2. All the works are expected to be original and positive.

3. Your contributions will certainly make the event a huge success.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing , On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改