Question

8．下文中共有10处语言错误，每行中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删 除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
A performance in our dty is making people to think more about the overuse of plastic bags．
In front of a supermarket，five volunteers wore white plastic bags and walk around and through the crowd．The performance called on people to use less cloth bags instead of plastic ones．Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from customer in two food markets and all others were collected by 700students from a secondary school On that day，after leaving the food markets，customers were asked to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn't need Several hundreds plastic bags were collected for just two hours．

Answer 1

分析 短文讲述了关于拒绝使用塑料袋的一场公益性演出，志愿者们身穿白色塑料袋穿行在人群中，呼吁人们尽量用布袋代替塑料袋，志愿者穿的塑料袋是从附近食品商场和一所中学收集来的．从商场出来的顾客还被要求交出多余的塑料袋，短短两个小时
就收集了几百个塑料袋．

解答 A performance in our dty is making people to think more about the overuse of plastic bags．In front of a supermarket，
                                                              去掉to
five volunteers wore white plastic bags and walk around and through the crowd．The performance called on people to use
                                                               walked
less cloth bags instead of plastic ones．Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from customer in
去掉less                                                                                  worn                                                        customers
two food markets and all∧others were collected by 700students from a secondary school On that day，after leaving the food
                                    the                                                                                                              when
markets，customers were asked to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn't need Several hundreds plastic bags were
                                                                                                         they                               hundred
collected for just two hours．
               in

1．去掉to；考查不定式，这里make作为使役动词后面要跟省to不定式，故把to去掉．
2．walk改为walked；考查动词时态，这里walked和wore作并列谓语．
3．去掉less；考查句意，句意为"演出呼吁人们使用布袋来代替塑料袋"，不含比较的意思，所以去掉less．
4．wore改为worn；考查分词用法，这里bags和动词worn是被动关系，所以用过去分词．
5．customer改为customers；考查名词复数，根据句意，在商场的顾客应当很多，所以用复数．
6．all后面加the；考查冠词，这里用定冠词表示特指．
7．after改为when；考查句意，结合上下文语境，应该是"顾客在离开市场时…"所以用when．
8．we改为they；考查人称代词，结合句意，这里用they指代前面的customers．
9．hundreds改为hundred；考查名词，hundred，thousand等类似的单词前面有具体数词时，不能用复数．
10．for改为in；考查介词，intwo hours意为"在两个小时之内"，for+时间段 常用于完成时态．

点评 1．首先整体阅读短文，把握文章的中心思想；2．分析句式结构，弄清句群关系；3．运用单词，短语，句型等基本语言知识找出文中的错误，加以修改．