Question

【题目】假定你是李华，校学生会主席。即将高中毕业，你代表全体高三学生邀请外教Jeff来参加毕业典礼。

1．时间：6月6日 上午9：00； 地点：学校音乐厅；

2．介绍毕业典礼的活动；

3．希望Jeff能够发表简短的演讲。

注意：

1．词数80左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jeff,

__________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jeff,

I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union, writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony.

The ceremony is to be held in the school Music Hall at 9:00 am, on June 6th. It will start with the School Anthem(校歌), which is followed by various performances raging from dances to martial arts. Moreover, videos made by students themselves will bring the vivid recollections of past school life into visual reality. Should our graduation ceremony ended up with your speech, it would do us a great honor.

Please reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章主题和内容要点已经给出，但需要考生在写作时，合理发挥想象力，做到有话可说，使文章的表达自然，丰满。

注意以下几点：1.通篇以一般将来时为主。2不能简单罗列要点，注意使用恰当的连接词，使行文连贯。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句型，以提高文章的档次。4. 注意字数：80字左右。5.规范誊写，使卷面整洁。

此外，应注意除了题干中给出的三条要点，在信的开头应点明写信背景，即题干中隐含的信息：假定你是李华，校学生会主席。即将高中毕业，你代表全体高三学生邀请外教Jeff来参加毕业典礼。从而点明来信目的；最后也要有结尾，如：盼尽快回复等。

【范文亮点】

It will start with the School Anthem(校歌), which is followed by various performances raging from dances to martial arts.使用了定语从句以及动词现在分词作后置定语，即非谓语动词的用法。

Moreover, videos made by students themselves will bring the vivid recollections of past school life into visual reality.使用了动词过去分词作后置定语。

Should our graduation ceremony by ended with your speech, it would do us a great honor.使用了虚拟语气，同时do sb. an honor（是某人的荣幸）用得也不错。