Question

【题目】Shenzhen Daily 就 “Health and Wealth, Which Is More Important?” 在读者中展开讨论。假设你是李华，向报社投稿。请依据下列要点，适当添加细节，写一篇100词左右的短文。首句已给出，不计入总词数。
1）财富比健康重要。富人受人尊敬，而穷人受歧视；
2）健康胜于财富，健康的人才能享受生活；
3）你的看法。
Health and Wealth, Which Is More Important?
Some people hold the view that wealth is more important than health.
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Answer 1

【答案】Health and Wealth, Which Is More Important?

Some people hold the view that wealth is more important than health. They think that a wealthy person will be respected in this world, while a poor person will be looked down upon by others. Therefore, a person who tries all means to make money will be considered (to be) a hero no matter whether he is in good health or poor health.

However, the majority of people believe that health is more important than wealth. For example, a healthy scientist can achieve more success in his scientific research. Only if a person enjoys good health, can he really enjoy his life.

In my opinion, health is more important than wealth. Good health can bring us success as well as real happiness. So health is the most important thing that one has to treasure in the world.

【解析】考查正反观点类写作。本文的结构很清晰，分为三段。前两段中考生就“健康和财富哪一个更重要”进行讨论，双方观点均已经给出，考生需要用合适的句式把双方的观点表达清楚。在写作中可以使用一些高级句式结构，如从句，谚语等；也要使用一些好的短语搭配，在串联各要点的时候可以适当使用一些串联词连接上下文，但串联词的使用不能堆砌。在发表个人观点的时候，要旗帜鲜明地说明你认为健康更重要，然而分层说明自己的理由。