Question

【题目】某英语报纸以“What makes a good English teacher?”为题向学生征集稿子。假设你叫李华，请你将你班讨论结果用英语写一篇文章向该报投稿。内容如下：

A. 学科知识扎实

B. 课堂生动有趣

C. 对学生既严格也关心

D. 发音优美，讲解清晰

E. 你自己的观点及理由 （不能重复以上四点）

要求：1、可适当发挥

2、词数：120词左右，开关和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

Recently our class has had a discussion about “What makes a good English teacher”. We have the following ideas.

First of all, a good English teacher must have a sound knowledge of the subject. Thus, we can learn much from him or her. Then, on one hand, the teacher can make the classes lively and interesting, in which we won’t fall asleep. On the other hand, not only is the teacher strict with us, but also he cares about us. What’s more, the teacher should pronounce beautifully and explain clearly what he or she is teaching.

As far as I’m concerned, in order to set a good example to the students, a good English teacher should behave and dress properly.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇投稿，所以在语言的使用上要大众化，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要充实文章内容，需要注意不要偏离文章中心。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语First of all首先；have a knowledge of有。。的知识；fall asleep睡觉；be strict with 对某人要求严格；care about关心；As far as I’m concerned在我看来；Then, on one hand, the teacher can make the classes lively and interesting, in which we won’t fall asleep.这个句子in which引导非限制性定语从句；What’s more, the teacher should pronounce beautifully and explain clearly what he or she is teaching.这个句子what引导宾语从句；