Question

【题目】根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、100词左右的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内。

假设你叫李琳。你的加拿大网友Elizabeth最近遇到了一些不开心的事情。阅读她发给你的e-mail，然后根据她的问题给她写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议。

Dear friend, I’m really unhappy now because my parents always make me stay at home and study every night during the week. They say that I must study hard for my exams. But in my opinion, I don’t have to work so hard all the time. I have problems on weekends, too On weekends I can go out with my friends, but I have to be home before 20:00. It’s crazy! They don’t want me to go to parties, either. They say it won’t do good for my studies. What should I do? Can you give me some suggestions? Elizabeth

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Elizabeth,

I’m sorry to hear that you’re not happy now. It’s very common for us to have such kind of problems. So don’t worry. Here I have some suggestions for you.

Firstly, you’d better make a schedule, set up a goal for each day and show them to your parents. Secondly, you should talk with your parents, telling them all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Please don’t be annoyed with them, which only makes things worse. The last thing is to do what you have promised. When they find you are strong-minded and act properly, they won’t be worried about you. Then they won’t set so many rules for you.

Please have a try. I’m looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours,

Li Lin

【解析】

试题分析：本篇文章是一个书信体作文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、确定文章的总体框架，要在试题给出的立场的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。1.本文文法简单流畅，不拖泥带说，句式多样。 2.使用了多样词组 3.文章行文结构严密，能够结合自己的看法，具有现实意义 4.逻辑鲜明，思路清晰。在考场上可谓一篇高分佳作。