Question

假设你是李华，是某外国语学校的一名学生。最近，你班将举办一个主题为How shall we behave ourselves in school?的班会。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文：
1. 纪律方面；2. 学习方面；3. 人际关系方面。
注意：
1. 标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯。
3. 词数：120左右。
How shall we behave ourselves in school
As students, it is important for us to behave ourselves in school.
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

As students, it is important for us to behave ourselves in school. Here is what I think we should do:
First, we should obey the school rules. In class, don’t talk with each other, eat food or use mobile phones. After class, we should behave politely to each other. Second, we are supposed to finish our homework in time and prepare the new lessons. Only by listening to our teachers attentively in class and working hard after class can we do well in our lessons. Last but not least, it is important to get along well with our teachers and classmates. A pleasant relationship with them can contribute much to our studies.

解析试题分析：考查提纲作文，考生首先要仔细审题，话题是How shall we behave ourselves in school?要点是已经给出1. 纪律方面；2. 学习方面；3. 人际关系方面。要考虑以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，又要包括所有的要点，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。
【亮点说明】文中使用了好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如：be supposed to 应该，contribute much to 对…有很大贡献，Here is what I think we should do这句话用了表语从句， Only by listening to our teachers attentively in class and working hard after class can we do well in our lessons. 这句话用了倒装句， it is important to get along well with our teachers and classmates. 这句话用了it做形式主语，还有文章还使用了First, Second, Last but not least,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查提纲类短文