Question

【题目】假设你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(to scribble) 和乱丢垃圾(to litter) 的行为，请用英语给校英语报编辑写一封信。信中应包括以下内容：

1. 说明写信目的；

2. 对这些行为进行批评；

3. 提出建议。

注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。（本次考试开头和信首及落款将不在答题纸上体现）

Dear Editor,

I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3.

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3. I’m writing to tell you that it has been alarmingly shocking to see so much scribing and littering in our school, but ironically, seemingly everyone pretends to get used to the phenomenon.

Without doubt it not only brings our school under a cloud, but also has a bad effect on students’ mind. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是一封书信。假设你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写和乱丢垃圾的行为，请用英语给校英语报编辑写一封信。

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 说明写信目的；2. 对这些行为进行批评；3. 提出建议。

写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：shocking to see so much scribing and littering，pretend to，get used to the phenomenon，without doubt， have a bad effect on，place more dustbins around，set up specific rules against such behavior，Students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，become a more enjoyable place. 可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。