Question

13．假设你是高二（1）班李华，参与学校英语校刊征稿活动，向全校同学推荐一个游戏网页．请根据下面提供的信息，介绍该网页的基本情况，并谈谈自己对此活动的感想．
参考词汇：赞助商sponsor（n．）；一粒a grain of
注意：
1．开头已为你写好．
2．词数不少于60．
My dear fellow schoolmates，here I'm introducing you an interesting game website．
                                                                        
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                        

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们向全校同学推荐一个游戏网页，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：介绍该网页的基本情况．谈谈自己对此活动的感想．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为介绍该网页的基本情况．第二部分为谈谈自己对此活动的感想．
重点短语与句型：
introduce sb sth．向某人介绍某物…
be aimed to 目的，旨在
be curious about 好奇
make a big difference to起作用，有影响
高分句型一：My dear fellow schoolmates，here I'm introducing you an interesting game website，which  is aimed to help hungry children as well as enlarge the English vocabulary of the game players．．此句用了 which  引导非限制性定语从句
高分句型二：I think the rice I donate may not make a big difference to end hunger in the world此句用了定语从句 I donate 修饰the rice

解答 My dear fellow schoolmates，here I'm introducing you an interesting game website，which  is aimed to help hungry children as well as enlarge the English vocabulary of the game players．（高分句型一）Recently I find my English has greatly improved since I started playing the games on it．If you are curious about it．Please log on the website http://www．freerice．com now．Then you may start to answer the questions on English words．For each answer you get right，the sponsor of the website will donate 10 grains of rice to the WFP．（介绍该网页的基本情况）
    I think the rice I donate may not make a big difference to end hunger in the world．（高分句型二）．However，if every day thousands of people earn grains of rice，while having fun and learning on Freerice，the power will surely be greater．My dear schoolmates，do you want to try something different and meaningful？Join me and join Freerice!（谈谈自己对此活动的感想）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．