Question

春天是旅游的好季节，某中学校长要求各班同学就春游一事展开讨论。讨论的主题是：学校要不要组织学生春游。校长还要求班长就讨论的情况用英语写一封信给他。
假定你是某班班长李华，请你根据下列表格中的信息客观地介绍讨论情况。
注意：1．信的格式已为你写好；            2．词数：120字左右；
3．生词：拓宽 broaden    负担 burden
70％的学生赞成春游
1．可以领略大自然的优美风景；      2．拓宽视野，增长知识；
3．呼吸新鲜空气,有益于身体健康。
30％的学生反对春游
1．时间紧，耽误学习；             2．增加父母经济负担；
3．担心安全。
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you the discussion we’ve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
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Yours truly,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
Opinions on the question are divided as follows: 70％ of the students think that the school should organize the spring outing. They believe that the spring outing can make them enjoy the beautiful scenery of nature, which can broaden our vision and fill us with more knowledge. They also say that the air in the open fields is fresher. What’s more, fresh air does a lot of good to our health.
On the other hand, the rest don’t like the idea of going out for a spring outing. In their opinion, time is very precious, so they have to grasp every minute to work hard at their lessons. Travelling costs much money. In that case, it will add to their families’ burden. Above all, no one can be sure of the safety of every student.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly
Li Hua

解析试题分析：考查正反观点类议论文。本文讨论的话题为：学校要不要组织学生春游；给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
考点：考查正反观点类议论文写作
点评：本文题型是考生非常熟悉的正反观点类的议论文，在平时的练习中也有相应的模板。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，发表个人意见时使用第一人称。本文的要点均已给出，考生需要使用合适的连接词把孤立的要点联系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高级的词汇词组如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的档次分。在文章红可以适当使用一至两句谚语如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高获得高分的可能性。