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目前，科技的发展如此之快已超出了我们的想象，克隆技术成为世界上最先进的技术之一。针对这一技术，有人持肯定的态度，有人反对。根据下面的表格，写一篇文章，并阐发自己的态度和看法。

支持	反对	你的看法？
1．制造出一些有价值的器官来挽救人类的生命。	1．克隆是对人生命的不尊重。
2．治愈类似于癌症之类的顽症。	2．干涉自然，人类的生命将不再是唯一的。
3．帮助那些不能生育的拥有属于自己的孩子。	3．在动物界创造出更多的疾病。
4．帮助那些想克隆自己去世的孩子的人。	4．使地球人口激增，

注意：
1．对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Science is developing so fast that it is beyond our imagination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

Answer 1

Science is developing so fast that it is beyond our imagination. Cloning is one of the more advanced technologies. Is it good or bad? Different people have different opinions.
Some people think we can benefit from it. Firstly, it can be used to produce valuable tissues and organs that could be used to cure diseases like cancer. Secondly, It can be used to help those who are unable to have a baby but want a baby genetically related to themselves. Besides, it can help those who want to clone their dead children.
But some people think cloning shows no respect for human life, and human life would no longer be unique. More seriously, it would create more disease in the animal world and cause Earth’s population growth.
In my opinion, although the technique is beneficial to mankind in many aspects, cloning human beings will be at the cost of the existence of mankind itself.

解析这是典型的议论文，第一段提出话题，第二段说明克隆的优点，第三段是克隆的缺点，第四段是表述作者自己的观点。
中间两段是按照要点去陈述，要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，不能出现拼写和语法错误，好的句型，词组会给文章增色的。例如第二段里的it can be used to produce valuable tissues and organs that could be used to cure diseases like cancer. 和It can be used to help those who are unable to have a baby but want a baby genetically related to themselves.都用了被动语态和定语从句，第二段的词组 shows no respect for human life用的也很好。熟练正确的使用学过的知道能体现考生的水平。
最后一段是作者自己的观点，观点要明确，不要含糊，最好给出自己的令人信服的理由。就像范文里一样although the technique is beneficial to mankind in many aspects, cloning human beings will be at the cost of the existence of mankind itself. 作者表达对克隆的担忧，让读者思考。