Question

请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Never be afraid of making mistakes. Actually, making progress is making mistakes. Mistakes reveal where success lies.

注意：1．无须写标题，不得找抄英语提示语； 2．除诗歌外，文体不限；

3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 4．词数120左右

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

one possible version:

Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may make a difference.

I still remember how my spoken English improved. At the beginning, I always kept silent in oral class to avoid making mistakes. Before long my teacher knew about my situation. He encouraged me to speak out what I wanted to regardless of mistakes. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmates would help me figure out how I could have avoided them. Practice makes perfect. With time going by, I build up my confidence, and now I can talk fluently in English. Just as the saying goes, every bean has its black.

Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Learn from them, and success is just awaiting us.

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，英文提示的意思是：进步就是在不断的犯错中取得的，所以不应该害怕犯错。通过具体的事例来说明对所给句子的理解。短文应该用一般过去时。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：make a difference of ，what、Whenever引导的从句，和Practice makes perfect. With time going by等都很不错。

考点：提纲作文。