Question

2．假如你叫李华，你的网友Johnny六年前曾在你的家乡担任外教，最近发来邮件询问你家乡的变化．请你给Johnny回复一封邮件，要点如下：
1．家乡的变化（住、行等方面）；
2．存在的问题（污染等）．
注意：1．次数100词左右；2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3．开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：modern facilities（现代化设施）
Dear Johnny，
I'm glad to hear from you and I'm more than willing to tell you what you are concerned about．
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I hope that you'll be back to have a look at the new town soon．
                                                                     Yours，
                                                                     Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给六年前曾在家乡担任外教的Johnny回复一封邮件告诉他家乡的变化，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是现在完成时，内容要点包括：家乡的变化（住、行等方面）；存在的问题（污染等）．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为家乡的变化．第二部分为存在的问题．
重点短语与句型：
more than非常
be willing to do sth愿意做某事
be concerned about关心，担心
take place 发生
take measures to do sth采取措施做某事
高分句型一：Our living conditions have improved greatly and many people have moved into large and comfortable houses，which are equipped with modern facilities..此句用了which 引导非限制性定语从句
高分句型二：Hopefully the government will take measures to solve the problems so that our hometown can enjoy healthy and steady development in the years to come．此句用so that引导结果状语从句

解答 Dear Johnny，
    I'm glad to hear from you and I'm more than willing to tell you what you are concerned about．The last few years have witnessed great changes taking place in my hometown．Our living conditions have improved greatly and many people have moved into large and comfortable houses，which are equipped with modern facilities（高分句型一）．Believe it or not，many families now have cars of their own．Wide roads have been built and tall buildings can be seen everywhere．（家乡的变化）
   Hand in hand with the rapid development of the economy，however，have arisen many problems，especially the serious air and water pollution．Hopefully the government will take measures to solve the problems so that our hometown can enjoy healthy and steady development in the years to come．I hope that you'll be back to have a look at the new town soon．（高分句型二）（ 存在的问题）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．