分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们给美国朋友Peter写封信介绍中国学生身体素质逐年下降,肥胖人数增多并询问美国学生的健康情况,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第三人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:调查结果;肥胖的原因(至少两条);专家建议;询问美国中学生的健康状况.我们此篇作文分为三部分,第一部分为写信意图.第二部分为中学生的健康状况调查结果以及身体素质逐年下降,肥胖人数增多的原因.第三部分为专家的建议及询问美国中学生的健康状况.
重点短语与句型:
year by year逐年
have a heavy load 有沉重负担
have a balanced diet均衡饮食
at least至少
高分句型一:I'd like to tell you something about the survey conducted last week in our school about middle school student's health in China.此句用了过去分词conducted作后置定语
高分句型二:One reason could be that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom do physical exercise此句用了that 引导表语从句以及so that 引导结果状语从句.
解答 Dear Peter,
I'd like to tell you something about the survey conducted last week in our school about middle school student's health in China.(高分句型)(写信意图)
The survey shows that the state of middle school students'body quality has been getting worse year by year,with more people having the problem of being overweight.One reason could be that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom do physical exercise(高分句型二).Another reason is that they don't do labor work like housework.Besides,they don't have a balanced diet.(中学生的健康状况调查结果以及身体素质逐年下降,肥胖人数增多的原因)
To deal with the situation,some experts suggest that students should do sports for at least one hour a day.They are also advised to eat more fruits and vegetables and refuse junk foods.In the end,I'd like to learn about the situation about that in your country.Looking forward to your reply.(专家的建议及询问美国中学生的健康状况)
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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