Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校学生会将举办70周年国庆英文演讲比赛，将邀请英文外教Peter担任评委，请你写封 邀请函，内容包括：

1. 活动主题“我爱中国”

2. 活动时间和地点

3. 比赛议程

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.邮件开头和结尾已写好，不包含在字数内。

Dear Peter,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter，

I sincerely invite you to participate in the“National Day”English speaking competition in which you will serve as a judge．

Our activity are to be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3：00 p. m. on September 30. The theme of the English speaking competition is “I love China”. When each speaker ends，each judge will comment on the speaker’s speech content and skills as well as give a mark comprehensively. According to the scores，the competition has one first prize，two second prizes，three third prizes，and ten outstanding awards．At the end of the competition，all the judges will go on stage to give awards to the winners and take photos．

Looking forward to your coming！

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，写一封邀请函。

第一步：

审题: 邀请函

人称：第二、三人称

时态： 一般现在时和一般将来时

结构： 总分法，分三部分，第一部分写信目的，第二部分说明比赛具体安排，第三部分期待Peter的到来。

要点：

1.写信目的：邀请Peter当英文演讲比赛的评委

2．比赛的具体安排

①活动时间和地点：9月30 日下午3点在学术报告厅举行

②活动主题是“我爱中国”

③ 比赛议程：每个演讲后评委要发表评论，并给分；根据评委给分，比赛结束时进行颁奖

3．期待Peter的到来

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）

invite sb. to； participate in；speaking competition；serve as ；theme；comment on；content ；skills；give a mark ；comprehensively；according to ； prize；outstanding； give award；winner；take photos

第三步：连词成句

(1)I invite you to participate in the “National Day” English speaking competition.

(2)You will serve as a judge in the competition.

(3)Our activity will be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3：00 p. m. on September 30.

(4)The theme of the English speaking competition is “I love China”.

(5)Each judge will comment on the speaker’s speech content and skills.

(6) Each judge will give a mark.

(6)The competition has one first prize，two second prizes，three third prizes，and ten outstanding awards．

(7)All the judges will go on stage to give awards to the winners and take photos．

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)

用定语从句连接下面连个句子

(1)I invite you to participate in the “National Day” English speaking competition.

(2)You will serve as a judge in the competition.

→I invite you to participate in the “National Day” English speaking competition in which

you will serve as a judge

用多种方式表达“…将要举行”

(3)Our activity will be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3：00 p. m. on September 30.

→Our activity are to be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3：00 p. m. on September 30.

→Our activity is scheduled to be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3：00 p. m. on September 30.

→According to the schedule, our activity will be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3：00 p. m. on September 30.

用并列句连接下面两个句子

(5)Each judge will comment on the speaker’s speech content and skills.

(6) Each judge will give a mark.

→ Each judge will comment on the speaker’s speech content and skills as well as give a mark.

→ Each judge will comment on the speaker’s speech content and skills and give a mark as well.

→ Each judge will not only comment on the speaker’s speech content and skills but also give a mark.

适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次 ，增加文章的可读性。