Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华。你校将在寒假期间组织留学生京剧训练营。请给你班的美国交换生Jim写封邮件，告诉他相关信息。邮件的内容包括：

1.介绍训练营的相关安排（如时间、内容等）；

2.说明训综营的目的；

3.表达希望对方参加的愿望。

注意：词数100左右

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Answer 1

【答案】I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news.

Our school will run a Peking Opera camp for foreign students this winter vacation.It will start from February 5th and last ten days.Some famous artists will offer basic courses in this national treasure,including singing,dialogues, movements as well as facial make-up.They want to present the idea that Peking Opera is not just an art,but a symbol of traditional Chinese culture.

I know you’re interested in Peking Opera,so I hope you’ll join the camp and have a good time there.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇邮件，文章内容要点已经给出，但在写邮件时应该注意一下几点：

１.注意邮件格式，尤其是在题目中没有给出开头和结尾的情况下。

２.无论是邮件还是信件开头一般开门见山，直接交代写作原因，切忌语言复杂啰嗦。

３.文章内容要包含题目要求的所有要点，包括训练营的时间地点和训练营的目的，文章最后要表达希望对方参加的意愿。

【范文亮点】

文章第一段用I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news.一句话吸引读件人的兴趣，第二段具体点出事件的内容、时间、地点等，最后一段写出自己写邮件的目的。整篇文章结构十分清晰，语言简洁。