Question

11．假如你是李华，最近你在澳大利亚布里斯班的home stay打算来中国旅游并来看望你，来之前有些问题要咨询你，请根据下面home stay的电子邮件用英语回一封电子邮件．
Hi Li Hua，
Hope you and your family are well．We have booked a tour to see the sights of China in August In the travel we plan to fly to Wuhan to see you．How does that sound？Because we are going to stay in your city for two days，so can you keep us informed of your arrangements about our stay and how can we get to your city from the airport？By the way，please tell me which hotel we had better reserve in your city？
Waiting for your reply!
Steven and Karen
注意：
1．词数100字左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．写作内容不要透露你所在城市的任何信息，推荐酒店为White Swan Hotel．
Hi Steven and Karen，
I'm  more than thrilled to know you are going to be with us for two days and
                                                                  
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给澳大利亚布里斯班的home stay写一封电子邮件．告知他要来中国旅游而咨询的一些问题．
写作时人称以第一和第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．开头-引出话题； 2．具体安排：安排行程；到达方式；预定宾馆．
重要短语：more than（非常），be worthwhile to do（值得做某事），get a better understanding of（有更好的理解），have a feast for（享受…），It is very convenient for sb to do（对某人来说很方便做某事），pick sb up（用车接某人），save sb sth（节省某人某物），as for（关于），well-equipped（配备良好），reserve sth（预定某事），have a discount（打折扣）．
【高分句型一】
1．I'm more than thrilled to know ①that you are going to be with us for two days ②and I'm writing to tell you my arrangements for your stay in our city．
①此处是由连词"that"引导的宾语从句，主句为"I'm more than thrilled to know"．
②此处是由连词"and"连接的两个并列的句子．
【高分句型二】
2．Additionally，①since ②there lies a lake in our city，we can cycle around the lake to have a feast for our eyes．
①此处是由连词"since"引导的原因状语从句，主句为"we can cycle around the lake to have a feast for our eyes"．
②此处是完全倒装句型，类似"There be"结构的倒装句型如："There lies/stands/exists/lived"等．
【高分句型三】
3．By the way，it is very convenient for my parents and me to pick you up at the airport，which can save you a lot of trouble from taking a bus or a train．
    此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"it is very convenient for my parents and me to pick you up at the airport"．

解答 Hi Steven and Karen，
I'm more than thrilled to know that you are going to be with us for two days and I'm writing to tell you my arrangements for your stay in our city．【高分句型一】（开头-引出话题）
I swear you will find it worthwhile to visit our city．I can guide you to the museum．Therefore you can get a better understanding of our history．Additionally，since there lies a lake in our city，we can cycle around the lake to have a feast for our eyes．【高分句型二】（安排行程）By the way，it is very convenient for my parents and me to pick you up at the airport，which can save you a lot of trouble from taking a bus or a train．【高分句型三】（到达方式）
As for the hotel，I strongly recommend White Swan Hotel．It is a five-star hotel with well-equipped rooms and excellent services．If you can reserve a room in advance，you can have a good discount．（预定宾馆）
Looking forward to your coming!
Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．