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【题目】书面表达

近来，中国游客在海外的不文明行为倍受争议。假设你是李华，一名国际旅行社的导游，就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观点。请根据下面的提示完成作文。

1、列举不文明行为： 2、指出其影响： 3、提出建议。

注意：1、词数100左右；

2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3、首句已给出，不计入总词数。

As a tour guide of an international travel agency，I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad．

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Answer 1

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One Possible Version:

As a tour guide of an international travel agency, I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad. They speak loudly in public places, carve characters on tourist attractions, throw rubbish, spit everywhere, and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights. Such bad behavior overseas has caused great damage to the image of the Chinese people and our country as well.

Measures should be taken to stop this. First, before going abroad, tourists should be trained to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs. Besides, it is a good idea to teach kids to be responsible citizens from kindergarten days. Last, laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places. I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.

【解析】试题分析：近来，中国游客在海外的不文明行为倍受争议。假设你是李华，一名国际旅行社的导游，就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观点。请根据下面的提示完成作文。要点包括：1、列举不文明行为；2、指出其影响；3、提出建议。这是一篇明显的提纲作文，就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出以进行写作。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求，那么文体应为应用文体；又根据“你是李华” 写作时即用第一人称“我”，即李华；时态主要用一般现在时即可。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。然后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。

【亮点说明】本文语言凝练，论点鲜明，条理层次清晰。文章第一段介绍自己旅行发现的不良现象；第二段就介绍应该采取的措施和自己的看法。文章使用了被动语态Measures should be taken to stop this（应该采取措施制止这种现象），tourists should be trained to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs（游客应该被训练遵守社交和公共秩序，尊重当地的宗教和习惯），laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places（应该制定法律惩罚那些在公共场合行为恶劣的人）；who引导的定语从句who behave badly in public places（那些在公共场合行为恶劣的人）。高级短语和结构：cause damage to给……带来危害；win respect for为……赢得尊重。最后一句使用I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.我期待海外游客将会改变他们的行为并为他们自己和我们的国家赢得尊重，作者提出自己的希望并给文章一个完美的结束。