Question

假如你是李华，现在高中二年级学习。请你根据表格内容，以The Highlight of My Senior High School Life为题，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍你的高中生活。

师生关系	谈谈师生关系
课程学习	介绍你在校的学习情况
课外活动	介绍你的课外活动
自己的感受	……

说明：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.在内容要求的基础上可适当发挥，以使短文意思通顺、连贯。
3.词数120～150.
The Highlight of My Senior High School Life
I’m Li Hua. Now I’m studying in senior 2 and experiencing an unforgettable and tense life.
                                                                                      
                                                                               

Answer 1

The Highlight of My Senior High School Life
I’m Li Hua. Now I’m studying in senior 2 and experiencing an unforgettable and tense life. As a student of Senior 2. I’m working hard to realize my dream.
In the class, I listen attentively and sometimes I discuss problems with my classmates. In self-study courses, I do a lot of homework or papers. But we have colorful out-of-class activities to relax ourselves after a day’s hard working. I like table tennis and I’m on our school table tennis. Besides, I like swimming very much, which I think is great to my health.
I’m glad that the relationship between our teachers and us students is very good. We often discuss problems and play together. I’d like to say I have learned a lot from my teachers both in books and in life.
Although sometimes studying is tiring, I feel very happy and this experience will be kept in my mind forever.

解析试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用虚拟语气，所以在写作时，要尤其注意虚拟语气的表达方式。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】范文中出现一些常见短语realize my dream 实现我的梦想；relax ourselves放松自己； learned a lot from 从当中学会。。；kept in my mind把。。记在心里。 Besides, I like swimming very much, which I think is great to my health.这个句子运用which引导的非限制性定语从句。I’d like to say I have learned a lot from my teachers both in books and in life这个句子中learn后面跟着一个宾语从句，不缺成分，由that来引导可省略。Although sometimes studying is tiring, I feel very happy and this experience will be kept in my mind forever这个句子中运用although引导让步状语从句。
考点： 提纲类作