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7．学校要开设英语选修课，现在学生征求意见．假如你是姚敏．你认为英语选修课可以开设英语试听说（English Visual-Audile-Oral）和演讲与口才（Speech and Eloquence）这两门课程．请你用英语给办公室张老师写一封100-120个词的信，推荐这两门课程，并分别说明推荐理由．
注意：信的抬头和落款已给出（不计入词数）．
Dear Mr．Zhang，
Knowing that our school is going to set up English elective courses，I'd like to give some suggestions． English Visual-Audie-Oral Course is a good choice．Most of us are interested in English videos and songs，which provide us vivid images and the rhyming rhythm．Thus，we can enjoy the local customs and western cultures as well as learn to sing English songs with joy and excitement．
In addition，it's necessary for us to improve our oral English．Although we are always learning English，we may not make a fluent speech or strongly debate with others like native speakers．That is why I recommend Speech and Eloquence Course．Pure pronunciation，classical expressions an d elegant gestures will be offered for us to learn and imitate．

I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation．
Yours sincerely，
Yao Min．

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分析 本文是应用文，根据所给提示给办公室张老师写一封信．推荐英语试听说和演讲与口才这两门课程，并分别说明推荐理由．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第一人称为主．时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主．重要短语：set up （建立，搭建），be interested in （感兴趣），would like to do （想要做某事），as well as（和，又，也），be always doing（总是做某事），make a speech （做演讲），in addition to（除…之外还），provide sb with sth （给某人提供…），debate with sb （与…争辩），recommend sth to sb （向…推荐）．

解答 Dear Mr．Zhang，
 Knowing that our school is going to set up English elective courses，I'd like to give some suggestions． English Visual-Audie-Oral Course is a good choice．Most of us are interested in English videos and songs，which provide us vivid images and the rhyming rhythm．【高分句型】Thus，we can enjoy the local customs and western cultures as well as learn to sing English songs with joy and excitement．（推荐英语试听说课程及原因）
  In addition，it's necessary for us to improve our oral English．Although we are always learning English，we may not make a fluent speech or strongly debate with others like native speakers．That is why I recommend Speech and Eloquence Course．【高分句型】Pure pronunciation，classical expressions and elegant gestures will be offered for us to learn and imitate．（推荐演讲与口才课程及原因）
 I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation．
  Yours，
  Yao Min

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．