Question

【题目】如今，在车站、餐厅、商场等公共场所都能看见许多成人和学生在不停地摆弄手机。现在，请你针对这一现象，用英语写篇短文。短文词数120字左右，要点必须包括：

1. 描述现象。 2. 分析原因（至少两条）。

3. 说明影响。 4. 提出建议。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Nowadays no matter where you are, you can see many adults and children playing with their mobiles phones. This can happen at a bus stop, in a restaurant or at a supermarket. Why is that? We’ve probably got two reasons. This first reason is supposed to be that people are trying to make good use of time. And the second one may be that people show little interest in what’s happening around them. However, focusing only on what’s on our mobile phones may not only do harm to our eyesight, but also prevent us from communicating normally. Therefore, some other ways to kill time are strongly suggested. For me, chatting with others is good replacement of playing always with mobile phones.

【解析】

试题分析：

本文是要求写一篇短文，介绍在各种场合许多成人和学生在不停地摆弄手机的现象，并分析原因，说明影响以及提出建议。此文章的拓展性比较强，学生可以充分发挥。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：状语从句 no matter where you are,；表语从句 This first reason is supposed to be that …以及And the second one may be that…；宾语从句what’s happening around them.和what’s on our mobile phones；not only …but also 不仅 …而且 not only do harm to our eyesight, but also prevent us from communicating normally。

2.使用了过渡词语： However；Therefore。

3.使用了重要短语： is supposed to 应该；show little interest in不感兴趣；do harm造成伤害； prevent … from阻止…。