Question

习作要求

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1)背景描述：描述故事发生的背景——遛狗

2)故事发生：小孩落水

3)故事高潮：救小孩的过程描述

4)故事结局：小孩获救，英雄受到赞扬

疑难注释

故事描述中常用的连接词

One evening/afternoon…, when suddenly, first, meanwhile, at the same time, then, after that, finally等。

Answer 1

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解析：

(1)One winter afternoon, my friend Xiao Hong was taking her dog for a walk near a river．It was cold．Some children were playing on the bridge, when suddenly one of them fell into the river．The other children cried for help．Hearing this, Xiao Hong ran up and jumped into the icy water without taking off her coat．She swam to the child and caught him．Then she swam back．It was so cold that she was almost frozen．When they were near the bank the dog helped them out．Finally the child was rescued and Xiao Hong became a local heroine． 　　(2)One Saturday afternoon, my friend Tina was taking her dog for a walk．Suddenly she heard “Help” from the children who were playing on the bridge．When she learned that a boy fell into the icy water, she ran up at once．First she jumped into the cold water and swam to the boy quickly．Then she caught the boy with one hand and tried to swam back．The water was so cold that she was almost frozen．At that time, the dog helped them out of the water．In the end, the boy was rescued and the local people respected Tina as a heroine．