Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last summer vacation, I spent two week at my aunt’s. She lived in the small mountain village, with a river ran nearby. Early one morning, I wanted to swim in the river, which some women villagers were washing clothes. I find a good place for swimming and I was just about to jump into the river while there came a cry, “Help! Help!” I looked the direction of the cry and I found that a little boy had been fallen into the river. I rushed over without delay, jumped into the water and swam quick towards the boy. Holding on to her over the water, I struggled to the bank. At last, the boy was saved

Answer 1

【答案】1. week→weeks

2. the→a

3.ran→running

4. which→where

5. find→found

6. while→when

7. look后加in

8.去掉been

9. quick→quickly

10. her→him

【解析】１.句意：我在我姑姑家待了两周。ｔｗｏ　ｗｅｅｋｓ，故把week→weeks。

２.句意：她住在一个小山村。故把the→a。

３.句意：她住在一个小山村，在附近有一条流动着的小河。ｗｉｔｈ　＋宾语＋ｄｏｉｎｇ　ｓｔｈ．此处是ｗｉｔｈ的独立主格结构，故把ran→running。

４.此处the river做先行词，在后面的非限制性定语从句中做地点状语，故把which→where。

５. 根据Last summer vacation可知I find a good place for swimming用一般过去时态，故把find→found。

６.句意：我正要跳进去，这时候听到哭声。故把while→when。

７. 固定结构：ｉｎ　the direction of朝―――方向，故在look后加in。

８.句意：我发现一个小男孩掉进河里。本句是主动语态，故去掉been。

９.副词修饰动词，故把quick→quickly。

１０.上文提到掉进河里的是一个小男孩，故把her→him。