Question

16．George claims that he read 53books in 2012．My friend and I found this fairly unbelievable，considering he seems to have a pretty full schedule．
Anyway，it appears that I am on track to read 72new books this year．But I've come to realize that this number can easily be skewed（扭曲）．For instance，currently I am reading Rising Tide：The Story of the Mississippi Flood of 1927．This book is over 700pages．It's going to take me the month of May （along with Harry Potter rereads； I can't read nonfiction while going to sleep）．So my May average will be way off．However，when I read chick-lits （鸡仔文学，都市女性文学），I can get those done in a day．I guess it all depends on what I choose to read．
In reality，reading is beneficial because it encourages us to slow down our thinking，and also to fully interpret someone else's experience．Reading keeps the mind sharp and expands a person's vocabulary．We read to educate ourselves．We read to help ourselves．We read to escape our own lives and live in that of another for a little while．
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；
2．以约120个词就"读书"这个话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
（1）对比上文，你每年阅读多少书籍；
（2）举例说明你从阅读中获得的好处；
（3）呼吁人们多读书．
【写作要求】
1．可以使用实例来支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇读写任务作文，根据所提供的材料信息，概括短文内容，并以"读书"为主题，阐述有你的想法．
写作时，应以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时，写作要点：1．概括所给短文内容；2．你每年阅读的书籍量．3．读书的益处；4．呼吁人们多读书．
重点短语：
compare with（与…比较）the number of（…的数量） play an important role in （起着重要作用） no matter what （无论怎样） be able to（能，会做…）
高分句型：
1．Reading really brings the readers a lot of benefits such as broadening one's mind．该句灵活运用benefit，broaden等词汇．
2． Reading opens the world and the human experience to everyone，no matter what his or her social status is．该句运用no matter what，social status等短语．
3．For example，I once read a book called Man，Woman and Child，which enabled me to understand the love in a family．该句为非限制性定语从句．

解答 Compared with the books his friend read in a year，the number of those ones the author read seems a little bit larger．Reading really brings the readers a lot of benefits such as broadening one's mind．（高分句型1）（概括短文内容）
Reading books plays an important role in a person's lifelong development．Nowadays though there exist other medias through which we can learn a lot，there is no denying that we should never give up reading books．Reading opens the world and the human experience to everyone，no matter what his or her social status is．（高分句型2）Books make us dream and wonder．They seize our imaginations and let us escape our daily life for a moment．Since I became a senior student，I have read a great number of books，around 40 books a year．For example，I once read a book called Man，Woman and Child，which enabled me to understand the love in a family．（高分句型3）Besides，I really built up a large vocabulary by reading many English books．（自己读书情况及从中得到的益处）
There are books on every subject written for almost every level of understanding．Therefore，we are able to make our own choices．I hope everyone can read a certain number of books every year．（发出呼吁）

点评 读写任务作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所给要点，写作时注意正确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词，句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．