Question

“实行低碳经济”，“过低碳生活”，现在已经成为了人们关注的热门话题。最近，你们班的同学就这个话题展开了热烈的讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息，给21st century 写篇文章，报道你们班级的讨论情况。

为什么要“实行低碳经济”	工厂排放有害物，人类活动产生大量二氧化碳，污染严重，环境恶化。 随着人口的增长，自然资源将会耗尽
如何走“绿色发展道路”	植树造林 回收和利用废弃物 开发新能源
过低碳生活如何“从我做起”	（联系自己拟定内容，至少列举两点）

注意：

对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

字数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总字数。

Nowadays, carrying out low carbon economy and living a low carbon life has been a hot topic. Recently our class had a heated discussion about it.

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Answer 1

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One Possible Version

 Nowadays, carrying out low carbon economy and living a low carbon life has been a hot topic. Recently our class had a heated discussion about it.

Through the discussion, we are fully aware of the necessity of carrying out a low carbon economy in our country. Factories have been producing large numbers of harmful chemicals. Meanwhile, human activities also let off carbon gases. As a consequence, all these contribute a lot to serious environmental pollution. What’s worse, with the increase of the population, natural resources will run out.

My calssmates put forward the following suggestions about how to develop in a green way. First, more trees should be planted. Second, it is significant for us to recycle and reuse the waste that people throw away. Third, new energy should be developed and promoted as soon as possible.

We all think it is our duty to live a low carbon life. We are supposed to save every bit of water and electricity. Besides, we should appeal to the people around us to make contributions to creating a green homeland. We are confident that with our combined efforts, our life will make a great difference.

【解析】

试题分析：

英语写作是一种创作性的学习过程。启动知识信息储存，构思立意，谋篇布局，遣词造句，对语言表达的正确性和准确性、思维的逻辑性和文章的条理性都比口语要求更高。先审题，弄清写作要求，审题是写好作文的前提，理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。提醒考生注意时态及语态的使用。写作时要注意适当地使用关联词承前启后，用词要得体，符合语言环境。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如had a heated discussion about, are fully aware of the necessity of, as soon as possible, make contributions to，还运用了宾语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：Through the discussion；As a consequence, What’s worse，First, Second, Third,等等。

考点：提纲作文。