Question

【题目】假如你是学校 Adventure Club的秘书(Secretary)，你和社团主席(President)讨论Liu Dong的申请，讨论完后，请你根据对话内容给Liu Dong回一封邮件。

Secretary: What do you think about Liu Dong's application?

President: I think he's excellent. He knows how to organize adventures, and he knows a lot about history and nature.He once managed to arrange the trip to the Mogao Caves for him and his parents.

Secretary: That's true, but I think he's too independent. We need club members who can work well with others.

President: On the other hand, we also need people who know how to make plans and carry them out. I think Liu Dong can do that.

Secretary: But if he is not friendly, no one will want to take part in the activities he organizes.

President: You’re right. I have a suggestion. Let's offer him a trial membership for three months. We can ask him to try to be friendlier and more outgoing. At the end of three months, he can become a full member if we think he is fit for our club.

Secretary: I think that's a good idea. Let's send him an email.

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Liu Dong，

I’m pleased to tell you that the Adventure Club has accepted you as a member. The committee thinks that you were very brave to arrange the trip to the Mogao Caves for you and your parents.

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Sincerely yours，

Ma Li

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Liu Dong，

I’m pleased to tell you that the Adventure Club has accepted you as a member. The committee thinks that you were very brave to arrange the trip to the Mogao Caves for you and your parents. You also know a lot about history and nature, which is very important for our club. It seems that you always carry out your plans. We hope to enjoy your interesting ideas for activities.

However, there are some conditions that you must meet. The club is offering you a trial membership for three months. The committee wants you to try to be friendlier and more outgoing. At the end of the trial membership, you can become a full member of the club if we think you are fit for our club.

Sincerely yours，

Ma Li

【解析】本文是一篇邮件，写的时候要注意邮件的格式，并注意组织好篇章结构和要点的表述。注意语气委婉，说清楚要表述的事情。还要注意语言要简练，不罗嗦。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【范文亮点】：

本文句子连贯，结构紧凑，要点描述全面，清晰。本句“I’m pleased to tell you that the Adventure Club has accepted you as a member. ”中含有that引导的定语从句。“The committee thinks that you were very brave to arrange the trip to the Mogao Caves for you and your parents. ”本句中含有that引导的宾语从句。“You also know a lot about history and nature, which is very important for our club. ”中which引导非限定性定语从句。本文还用了连词however，短语At the end of ，增加了文章的可读性与连贯性，是一篇不错的文章。