Question

19．利用所学知识，完成下面的小作文
1．我的朋友李明，经常为一些小事而心烦不能冷静．同学们都很厌烦他，不理睬他
（be upset about，keep calm，get/be tired of，ignore）
2．老师们很关心他，多次和他进行了面对面地交谈．但所有的努力都是白费力气
（ be concerned about，face to face）
3．一天黄昏时刻，他突然肚子疼．老师和同学们立刻把他送到医院并在那儿照顾
他 （at dusk，suffer from）
4．康复之后，他非常感激老师和同学们．（ recover，be grateful to ）
5．他再也不扰乱同学们了，并经常加入到他们当中来解决一些问题
（ join…in…，settle）
6．他和同学们现在相处得很好 （get along with）
7．在我看来，正是老师和同学们的爱和关心完全地改变了他
（ as far as sb is concerned，it is…that，entirely ）
注意：．字数：100～120词左右；可以适当增加细节．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The teachers and students sent him to hospital without delay and took care of him
高分句型二：
As far as I'm concerned，it's the love and care from the teachers and his classmates that has changed him entirely
句型一 The teachers and students sent him to hospital without delay and took care of him 该句中使用到了二个重要的短语：send sb to sp送某人去某地  take care of 照顾
句型二  that has changed him entirely 该句是一个由that引导的定语从句，that在句中作主语，替代前面的先行词love and care
此外，该文章中还有以下重要短语和词汇：
be concerned about 对．．关心   suffer from 遭受．． as far as sb be concerned 就．．看来
重要句型和重点短语的结合使用，使得文章表达更有层次，表达更为准确

解答 My friend Li Ming is always upset about some small things and couldn't keep calm．His classmates are tired of him and ignorehim．Teachers are concerned about him and often talk with him face to face，however，all the efforts are in vain．
  One day at dusk，he suffered from a stomachache．The teachers and students sent him to hospital without delay and took care of him．（高分句型一）After he recovered，he was grateful to the teachers and classmates．From then on，he no longer disturbs his classmates and often joins them in settling some problems．He is getting along well with his classmates now．（情况描述）
  As far as I'm concerned，it's the love and care from the teachers and his classmates that has changed him entirely．（高分句型二）（感受）

点评 该书面表达为读写任务型作文，该篇作文规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．