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分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类看图作文，根据提示信息当今社会必备的一种交流工具，但是对手机的过度依赖却成了社会的一种普遍现象，根据对图的理解，用英语写一篇作文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：简要描述图画内容；概述你对图画中做法的理解；举例说明图画对你的启示．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：in our daily life在我们的日常生活中；On one hand，On the other hand一方面，另一方面；at the same time同时；However然而；
    As is shown in the picture，three persons are playing with their cellphones when having dinner，involving themselves in a personal space．（高分句型一）句中As is shown in the picture属于as引导的非限制性定语从句，意思为"正如图中所示"；involving themselves in a personal space属于现在分词作状语
 It is common that we use cellphones as a means of communication for its convenience．（高分句型二）句中it为形式主语，that为真正的主语从句

解答 As is shown in the picture，three persons are playing with their cellphones when having dinner，involving themselves in a personal space．（高分句型一） The scene can be seen everywhere in our daily life．Some even have signs of anxiety if they don't have cellphones with them．
     It is common that we use cellphones as a means of communication for its convenience．（高分句型二）However，the fact that people are getting addicted to cell phones can't be ignored．
     I think there are two reasons for this．On one hand，people are eager to share ideas with others．On the other hand，not believing in others，they are unwilling to communicate with people around them face to face．（高分句型三）
     To solve this problem，I think making a balance of our life is the key．We should spend more time with our family and friends，and at the same time try to be self-controlled to avoid over-independence on it．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．