Question

【题目】假设你校英语俱乐部正在举办征文活动，请你根据下面这幅描述小男孩和奶奶的图画写一篇词数不少于120的短文。

内容要求：

1.描述图画内容，如情景，人物，动作(奶奶正在做家务活)等；

2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；

3.举例说明你能在尊老爱老方面做些什么。

注意：参考词汇：按摩massage n.﹠v.

Answer 1

【答案】

Respecting the elders is a good virtue. As is shown in the picture, a grandson might have realized that his grandma is tired from doing housework, he thinks that he should do something about it. So he gives his grandmother a gentle back massage, hoping that it can reduce his grandma’s tiredness.

This reminds me of my parents and grandparents who have been doing whatever they can do to let me have the best education. But, totally absorbed in my own study, I seldom take notice of their tiredness and never offer to do anything to make them feel comfortable.

Now I know I can help them with everyday cleaning; or at least clean my own bedroom. Meanwhile, I will do my best to work hard at my lesson, as far as I know my progress is the best reward for their love.

【解析】

试题分析： 本文是一篇提纲类作文，内容要求：描述图画内容，如情景，人物，动作(奶奶正在做家务活)等；结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；举例说明你能在尊老爱老方面做些什么。

亮点说明：本文用了三段式的结构，开门见山的写出了尊老方面的事情，用了 Meanwhile和 This reminds me等副词和短语有层次的写出了自己的感想。最后提出了自己的意见，本文是一篇不错的提纲类作文，字数也正好。