Question

【题目】每年都有许多人外出旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文明旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请你给报社写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：

1．尊重习俗；

2．不高声喧哗；.

3．其他。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Editor,

I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling, ________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go out for sightseeing . While enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.

In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places. More importantly, if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.

Yours ,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：

本文要求根据“文明旅游”给某英文报社写一封信，描述外出旅游的问题并提出文明旅游的建议。文章给出了提纲，成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅，有层次。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1. 使用高级句型：while引导的时间状语从句的which引导的定语从句While enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern；if引导的条件状语从句if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act；only引导的部分倒装Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well。2.使用了过度短语：first，besides，more importantly.3.使用了重要短语go out for sightseeing外出旅游，bear in mind牢记于心，be cautious about小心；谨慎