Question

18．请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章．
1．If you had billions of dollars，would you donate almost all of it to charity？Well that's what Mark Zuckerberg，CEO and founder of Facebook，just said he would do．Zuckerberg and his wife Priscilla Chan promised to give 99percent of their Facebook shares to society throughout their lifetime．Right now that is about $45billion （289billion yuan），and they plan to donate the money to things like science and education．
Many billionaires in the West have done similar things．Bill Gates，creator of Microsoft，made The Giving Pledge，which is where billionaires promise to gradually give away more than half of their wealth to charities．
2．China's first Charity Law was passed on March 16，2016，with lawmakers hoping it can give donors confidence that they are helping the people who really need help．The new law，which will take effect in September，makes it easier for charity groups to raise money and carry out their activities
"Charitable programs are indispensable for the fight against poverty．Formulating a charity law helps nongovernmental sources work together in taking targeted measures to eliminate poverty and contribute to achieving the goal of building a moderately prosperous society，"said Li Jianguo，vice chairman of the National People's Congress （NPC） Standing Committee．
3．"Charity"，which means providing aids to needy people，is becoming a popular word in China as the country struggles to reduce the gap between rich and poor．
Total donations to the Chinese government and registered charities  （2011-2015）
【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；
2．用约120个词就慈善捐助谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
（1）慈善捐助对受惠人群会有哪些影响；
（2）你最想加入的慈善组织是哪一类（助学、济贫、关爱残疾人、…），理由是什么．
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题．
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It is known that honesty plays an important role in our life，which can contribute to our success and earn us respect from others．
高分句型二：
But when the scandal was disclosed，not only did the company have to close down，but also some officials concerned were sent to prison．
句型一 ①It is known that honesty plays an important role in our life 该句是一个由it作形式主语的主语从句，真正的主语为that后面引导的从句 ②which can contribute to our success and earn us respect from others．该句是一个由which引导的费限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，替代前面出现的整个主句的内容
句型二 not only did the company have to close down，but also some officials concerned were sent to prison． 该句使用了固定短语：not only…but also 不但．．而且  当not only位于句首后面跟从句时，句子要使用部分倒装，即将主语同位于部分的助动词进行位置的交换，did the company have to close down
but also后的句子用陈书句语序
此外，该文章中还有以下重要短语和词汇：
play an important role in 在．．中起到重要作用  contribute..to 作贡献
重要句型和重点短语的结合使用，使得文章表达更有层次，表达更为准确

解答 It is known that honesty plays an important role in our life，which can contribute to our success and earn us respect from others．（高分句型一）Therefore，honesty is of vital importance and bring people benefits．Dishonesty may bring people short-term benefits．But actually，it will cost them friendship，love，social status or even life．Dishonesty destroys the harmonious relationship between people．What's worse，it even becomes a barrier of the moral development in society．San Lu Milk Powder Company made a lot of money by dishonest means．But when the scandal was disclosed，not only did the company have to close down，but also some officials concerned were sent to prison．（高分句型二）Personally，we should keep in mind that honesty is the best policy．We should try our best to avoid dishonesty．Only in this way can we trust each other and have a harmonious society．

点评 该书面表达为读写任务型作文，该篇作文规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．