Question

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号   ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线  \ 划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
I was surprising to receive your letter a few days ago. Since I came to the new school, I had planned to write to you. Therefore, the busy life of the school spared me no time. After came to the school, I made up of my mind to study hard. To tell you the truth, that was Miss White, my new English teacher, who changed my mind. She suggested that I give in my bad habits. Although he is very strict with us, all the students fond of her.
I have to stop here. I am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【小题1】surprising—surprised
【小题2】had--have
【小题3】Therefore---However
【小题4】came---coming
【小题5】去掉of;
【小题6】that—it
【小题7】in—up
【小题8】he---she
【小题9】are ∧ fond
【小题10】hear—hearing

解析【小题1】surprising—surprised 考查形容词。 本句使用surprised感到惊讶的，是由过去分词转换的形容词，通常修饰人或者与人有关的事物。
【小题2】had--have  考查动词的时态。前面的连词是since，与现在完成时连用，故使用have
【小题3】Therefore---However 考查连词辨析上下文之间存在着转折关系，故使用however。我原来计划写信给你，然而，忙碌的校园生活让我抽不出时间。
【小题4】came---coming 考查非谓语动词。 介词after后面要接动名词doing的形式。
【小题5】去掉of;    考查固定搭配。make up one’s mind下定决心做某事。
【小题6】that—it     考查固定句型结构。make up one’s mind下定决心做某事。
【小题7】in—up    考查固定短语。ive up放弃，本句是指放弃原有的坏习惯；give in屈服，让步；这是一个不及物动词短语，后面要接to…；形成give in to…向….屈服。
【小题8】he---she  考查代词辨析  本句的主语是Miss White是一位女性，故使用she做主语
【小题9】are ∧ fond  考查固定短语。be fond of喜欢…；本句在fond前面加are，构成系表结构。
【小题10】hear—hearing考查固定短语。look forward to期待着…；这里的to是介词，后面要接动名词形式
考点：短文改错