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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

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2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Recently an English speaking competition held in Chongqing People’s Great Hall on April 15. Senior I and II students from Chongqing take part in it. The students introduced Queensland and Chongqing but also compared life and study to Chongqing and Queensland. Through the competition students know Queensland better. They have also improved their language ability, who will be a good help for cultural communication. The first six best students will enjoy a freely trip to Queensland. We will live and study there for two weeks in August.

I also took part in a competition. Ranked 3rd, I will be given the chances too. I am glad I will experience life in Queensland myself and to improve my English as well.

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【解析】这是一篇记叙文,文章叙述了最近作者在重庆参加了一次英语演讲比赛,比赛中学生介绍了昆士兰和重庆,并且也比较了两地的生活和学习情况。比赛前六名的学生都有机会去昆士兰免费旅行,并且在那里呆两周的时间,作者获得了第三名,也有机会去昆士兰。

第一处:考查动词时态及语态。句子的主语competitionhold之间是被动关系,The students introduced Queensland and Chongqing可知,这里用的是一般过去时,所以比赛发生在过去,所以这里应该用一般过去时的被动语态,故把held改为be held.

第二处:考查动词时态。来自重庆的高一和高二的学生参加了比赛。根据下文的introduced可知,比赛发生在过去,也就是415日。所以谓语动词用一般过去时。故把take改为took.

第三处:考查连词。句意:学生介绍了昆士兰和重庆,并且也比较了两地的生活和学习情况。这里不是not only…but also,前面没有not only,根据句意这里表示前后是并列关系,也不是转折关系,不能用but,故把but改为and.

第四处:考查介词。句意:学生介绍了昆士兰和重庆,并且也比较了两地的生活和学习情况。表示某地的学习和生活应该用介词in,在大的地点前用in,故把to改为in.

第五处:考查定语从句的关系代词。句意:他们也提高了语言能力,这有利于他们的文化交流。这里是非限制性定语从句,先行词是逗号前的句子,当先行词是句子的时候,并且定语从句中的关系词作主语,所以只能用关系词which,who指人的,这里先行词不是指人的,故把who改为which.

第六处:考查形容词。trip是名词,“旅行”,它前应该用形容词修饰,freely是副词,free是形容词,“免费的”。故把freely改为free.

第七处:考查代词。句意:他们8月份将在那里居住和学习两周的时间。根据上文The first six best students will enjoy a freely trip to Queensland.这里句子的主语The first six best students前六名的学生(第三人称),下文应该用代词(第三人称)代替,用they不能用we,故把we改为they.

第八处:考查冠词。句意:我也参加了这次比赛,得了第三名。a表示泛指,这里提到是前面提到的作者参加的那次比赛,是表示特指,所以用定冠词。故把a改为the.

第九处:考查名词。句意:我也将给这个机会(去昆士兰呆两周的时间)。这是一个机会,所以用单数chance,故把chances改为chance.

第十处:考查动词。句意:我很高兴自己能在昆士兰体验生活,并提高我的英语水平。and连接的是两个并列的动词experienceimprove是并列的,所以应该用动词原形。故把to improve改为improve.

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